I couldn’t get a firm grasp of the characters. All in all, I give this piece a 4 out of 10.«12» Mainly due to grammar, spelling, and the like. Indian xxx All in all, I give this piece a 4 out of 10.«12» The sex was fine, but I was having trouble with the flow of the story. I couldn’t get a firm grasp of the characters. All in all, I give this piece a 4 out of 10.«12» The sex was fine, but I was having trouble with the flow of the story. I couldn’t get a feel for the characters. i cummed a little!~!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-01-04 13:16:51It seems a bit rushed. It seemed almost abstract like you were talking about someone else, not Kagome and Inuyasha.
