It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”. Indian xxx the formatting was good and the paragraph length was good. tell us that she looks up into his clear blue eyes, or that he brushes her long blond hair away from her face while she’s blowing him… the formatting was good and the paragraph length was good. Also character descriptions would probably be a good idea, it doesn’t have to be: “5’5″ tall, 130 pounds, blue eyes, etc” but some kind of description would be nice, maybe just work it into the story. It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”. It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”.
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Desislimgirl / Indian Desi Hancock
